Opened game and lost my eyes from this brightness, can you add darker themes so people with sensetive eyes can read without tryng to adjust while hurting us? At least i would be greatfull.
Hey, thanks for the little bit of support! This is not abandoned, but ADHD and college life have really slowed the progress. But again, thanks for the love.
Noticed a possible typo when (I think) the story refers to the Larcenist it says ‘‘They’s,, as if there are more than one “They,,. I believe this is a typo (May be wrong) but it’s suppose to be “Theirs,, if you wanted an possessive pronoun.
Am I the only one who can't get past the character creation/warning for the chapter? There's no button to proceed and it's just blank apart from the warnings.
I was on the priest path and I got this... "VOGEL[instert numbers I don't remember] path does not exist".
Also, I don't know if it was the design or my dyslexia acting up, but some of your passes started blurring together became difficult to read. Not like, physically blurring but like, words and passages mashed and when things became easier to understand I got confused and had to go reread certain things. Again, this part might be on me.
But I really like the way this story is going. I'm sort of sad that there's not more to it, because I think that would have lessened some of my confusion on certain topics (more examples for world building and time to get used to your writing style, of course) I can't wait for your update!
Hello! Thanks for the heads up about the Vogel origin, I'll fix it soon!
Also, regarding the blurry text, I physically blurr text only three times towards the end, but I'll check if words and passages are mashed together when they shouldn't be anyway!
Thanks for the attention given to this little project of mine.
← Return to game
Comments
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
Abandoned?
Hello ! I love it ! Is there an update soon ?
Opened game and lost my eyes from this brightness, can you add darker themes so people with sensetive eyes can read without tryng to adjust while hurting us? At least i would be greatfull.
is it supposed to freeze on the "LOVE TO THE FACELESS ONE" page? did i die?
old comment but nah that's the end of the current demo.
When is this going to be updated? I love this and want to see more! Please don't have abandoned this...
Hey, thanks for the little bit of support! This is not abandoned, but ADHD and college life have really slowed the progress. But again, thanks for the love.
Not a problem and I hear you... Well, it's a great game none the less
If you choose strawberry blond hair, the description right after reads "strayberry" instead.
Interesting premise and I look forward to finding out where this goes from here!
Thank for the comment and for the head ups about the typo!
I hope you appreciate the rest of the game when it comes out.
I found another typo. It’s when the MC is considering the offer in CH1 “it’s,, is spelled “i’ts,, one time.
You're an absolute lifesaver, thank you for the head ups once more!
NP, I tend to catch things to do with pronouns and descriptors because that’s mostly a thing my brain picks up on.
Noticed a possible typo when (I think) the story refers to the Larcenist it says ‘‘They’s,, as if there are more than one “They,,. I believe this is a typo (May be wrong) but it’s suppose to be “Theirs,, if you wanted an possessive pronoun.
Somewhere in CH1 (Note- it’s also in italics)
Hello, thank for the little heads up and for the comment! That They's is a stylistic choice, but I really appreciate it.
Ah okay! Just making sure, I’ve seen stuff like that before so I was just making sure! ^^
Is there a way past the "GLORY TO THE FACELESS ONE" screen? I've clicked the whole screen and haven't been able to find it..
Hello, I'm sorry for the inconvenience! That's the last part of the demo thus far!
oh! thank you! I hadn't realized ^^
Am I the only one who can't get past the character creation/warning for the chapter? There's no button to proceed and it's just blank apart from the warnings.
Hello! I’m terribly sorry for the inconvenience, I’ll make it clearer, the little blue arrow on the bottom of the page is the forward button.
I hope you have a good day.
Thank you, I will see if it works now!
Enjoyed the demo! There's a typo when choosing bald for hair colour > 'I'm blad'
Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you enoyed the demo, and thanks for the heads up as well!
i dont know how to get past the "Glory to the faceless one" Is it like a game over or
Hello! I'm sorry for the confusion, I forgot to add the passage where it shows it's the end of the current demo. Thanks for the heads up!
No prob! Im glad you replied cause i was really confused
I was on the priest path and I got this... "VOGEL[instert numbers I don't remember] path does not exist".
Also, I don't know if it was the design or my dyslexia acting up, but some of your passes started blurring together became difficult to read. Not like, physically blurring but like, words and passages mashed and when things became easier to understand I got confused and had to go reread certain things. Again, this part might be on me.
But I really like the way this story is going. I'm sort of sad that there's not more to it, because I think that would have lessened some of my confusion on certain topics (more examples for world building and time to get used to your writing style, of course) I can't wait for your update!
Hello! Thanks for the heads up about the Vogel origin, I'll fix it soon!
Also, regarding the blurry text, I physically blurr text only three times towards the end, but I'll check if words and passages are mashed together when they shouldn't be anyway!
Thanks for the attention given to this little project of mine.
This is actually pretty good. Being a fantasy enjoyer myself, I like the direction this is going. Looking forward to more.
THIS IS SO GOOD! I CANT WAIT TO PLAY MORE!
Love the setting and horror. Cant wait to play more